Acasia
I was a pupil in Uru Mānuka and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Pages
Home
Wednesday, 12 September 2018
my writing reflestion
<!-- </iframe--> <div style='clear: both;'></div> </div> <div class='post-footer'> <div class='post-footer-line post-footer-line-1'><span class='post-author vcard'> By <span class='fn' itemprop='author' itemscope='itemscope' itemtype='http://schema.org/Person'> <meta content='6537476355062344486' itemprop='articleBody/aiaBlogId'/> <meta content='4605807178353983708' itemprop='articleBody/aiaPostId'/> <span itemprop='name'>Anonymous</span> </span> </span> <span class='post-timestamp'> </span> <span class='post-comment-link'> </span> <span class='post-icons'> <span class='item-control blog-admin pid-1041579015'> <a href='https://www.blogger.com/post-edit.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=4605807178353983708&from=pencil' title='Edit Post'> <img alt="" class="icon-action" height="18" src="//img2.blogblog.com/img/icon18_edit_allbkg.gif" width="18"> </a> </span> </span> <div class='post-share-buttons goog-inline-block'> </div> </div> <div class='post-footer-line post-footer-line-2'><span class='post-labels'> Labels: <a href='https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/search/label/writing' rel='tag'>writing</a> </span> </div> <div class='post-footer-line post-footer-line-3'> <span class='reaction-buttons'> </span> <span class='post-location'> </span> </div> </div> </div> <div class='comments' id='comments'> <a name='comments'></a> <h4>7 comments:</h4> <div class='comments-content'> <script async='async' src='' type='text/javascript'></script> <script type='text/javascript'> (function() { var items = null; var msgs = null; var config = {}; // <![CDATA[ var cursor = null; if (items && items.length > 0) { cursor = parseInt(items[items.length - 1].timestamp) + 1; } var bodyFromEntry = function(entry) { if (entry.gd$extendedProperty) { for (var k in entry.gd$extendedProperty) { if (entry.gd$extendedProperty[k].name == 'blogger.contentRemoved') { return '<span class="deleted-comment">' + entry.content.$t + '</span>'; } } } return entry.content.$t; } var parse = function(data) { cursor = null; var comments = []; if (data && data.feed && data.feed.entry) { for (var i = 0, entry; entry = data.feed.entry[i]; i++) { var comment = {}; // comment ID, parsed out of the original id format var id = /blog-(\d+).post-(\d+)/.exec(entry.id.$t); comment.id = id ? id[2] : null; comment.body = bodyFromEntry(entry); comment.timestamp = Date.parse(entry.published.$t) + ''; if (entry.author && entry.author.constructor === Array) { var auth = entry.author[0]; if (auth) { comment.author = { name: (auth.name ? auth.name.$t : undefined), profileUrl: (auth.uri ? auth.uri.$t : undefined), avatarUrl: (auth.gd$image ? auth.gd$image.src : undefined) }; } } if (entry.link) { if (entry.link[2]) { comment.link = comment.permalink = entry.link[2].href; } if (entry.link[3]) { var pid = /.*comments\/default\/(\d+)\?.*/.exec(entry.link[3].href); if (pid && pid[1]) { comment.parentId = pid[1]; } } } comment.deleteclass = 'item-control blog-admin'; if (entry.gd$extendedProperty) { for (var k in entry.gd$extendedProperty) { if (entry.gd$extendedProperty[k].name == 'blogger.itemClass') { comment.deleteclass += ' ' + entry.gd$extendedProperty[k].value; } else if (entry.gd$extendedProperty[k].name == 'blogger.displayTime') { comment.displayTime = entry.gd$extendedProperty[k].value; } } } comments.push(comment); } } return comments; }; var paginator = function(callback) { if (hasMore()) { var url = config.feed + '?alt=json&v=2&orderby=published&reverse=false&max-results=50'; if (cursor) { url += '&published-min=' + new Date(cursor).toISOString(); } window.bloggercomments = function(data) { var parsed = parse(data); cursor = parsed.length < 50 ? null : parseInt(parsed[parsed.length - 1].timestamp) + 1 callback(parsed); window.bloggercomments = null; } url += '&callback=bloggercomments'; var script = document.createElement('script'); script.type = 'text/javascript'; script.src = url; document.getElementsByTagName('head')[0].appendChild(script); } }; var hasMore = function() { return !!cursor; }; var getMeta = function(key, comment) { if ('iswriter' == key) { var matches = !!comment.author && comment.author.name == config.authorName && comment.author.profileUrl == config.authorUrl; return matches ? 'true' : ''; } else if ('deletelink' == key) { return config.baseUri + '/delete-comment.g?blogID=' + config.blogId + '&postID=' + comment.id; } else if ('deleteclass' == key) { return comment.deleteclass; } return ''; }; var replybox = null; var replyUrlParts = null; var replyParent = undefined; var onReply = function(commentId, domId) { if (replybox == null) { // lazily cache replybox, and adjust to suit this style: replybox = document.getElementById('comment-editor'); if (replybox != null) { replybox.height = '250px'; replybox.style.display = 'block'; replyUrlParts = replybox.src.split('#'); } } if (replybox && (commentId !== replyParent)) { document.getElementById(domId).insertBefore(replybox, null); replybox.src = replyUrlParts[0] + (commentId ? '&parentID=' + commentId : '') + '#' + replyUrlParts[1]; replyParent = commentId; } }; var hash = (window.location.hash || '#').substring(1); var startThread, targetComment; if (/^comment-form_/.test(hash)) { startThread = hash.substring('comment-form_'.length); } else if (/^c[0-9]+$/.test(hash)) { targetComment = hash.substring(1); } // Configure commenting API: var configJso = { 'maxDepth': config.maxThreadDepth }; var provider = { 'id': config.postId, 'data': items, 'loadNext': paginator, 'hasMore': hasMore, 'getMeta': getMeta, 'onReply': onReply, 'rendered': true, 'initComment': targetComment, 'initReplyThread': startThread, 'config': configJso, 'messages': msgs }; var render = function() { if (window.goog && window.goog.comments) { var holder = document.getElementById('comment-holder'); window.goog.comments.render(holder, provider); } }; // render now, or queue to render when library loads: if (window.goog && window.goog.comments) { render(); } else { window.goog = window.goog || {}; window.goog.comments = window.goog.comments || {}; window.goog.comments.loadQueue = window.goog.comments.loadQueue || []; window.goog.comments.loadQueue.push(render); } })(); // ]]> </script> <div id='comment-holder'> <div class="comment-thread toplevel-thread"><ol id="top-ra"><li class="comment" id="c6097364317767986660"><div class="avatar-image-container"><img src="//resources.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif" alt=""/></div><div class="comment-block"><div class="comment-header"><cite class="user">Anonymous</cite><span class="icon user blog-author"></span><span class="datetime secondary-text"><a rel="nofollow" href="https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/2018/09/my-writing-reflestion.html?showComment=1537306124316#c6097364317767986660">19 September 2018 at 09:28</a></span></div><p class="comment-content">Bonjour Acasia, I'm Kirsty at Gilberthorpe school from Ngakunui. I love this blog post because it shows that you care about getting your work done and finished. How long did it take? ( probably not long ) And with hthat said I have to go comment on more blogs bye.</p><span class="comment-actions secondary-text"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="6097364317767986660">Reply</a><span class="item-control blog-admin blog-admin pid-1041579015"><a target="_self" href="https://www.blogger.com/delete-comment.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=6097364317767986660">Delete</a></span></span></div><div class="comment-replies"><div id="c6097364317767986660-rt" class="comment-thread inline-thread hidden"><span class="thread-toggle thread-expanded"><span class="thread-arrow"></span><span class="thread-count"><a target="_self">Replies</a></span></span><ol id="c6097364317767986660-ra" class="thread-chrome thread-expanded"><div></div><div id="c6097364317767986660-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="6097364317767986660">Reply</a></div></ol></div></div><div class="comment-replybox-single" id="c6097364317767986660-ce"></div></li><li class="comment" id="c5955030059738837980"><div class="avatar-image-container"><img src="//resources.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif" alt=""/></div><div class="comment-block"><div class="comment-header"><cite class="user">Anonymous</cite><span class="icon user blog-author"></span><span class="datetime secondary-text"><a rel="nofollow" href="https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/2018/09/my-writing-reflestion.html?showComment=1537306382990#c5955030059738837980">19 September 2018 at 09:33</a></span></div><p class="comment-content">Hi Acasia, this is very i like how it talk's about how you are going in writing i like how this is all just a writing but you talk more about your blog one because here is not much like you can talk about how you made it. well i have to go bye.</p><span class="comment-actions secondary-text"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="5955030059738837980">Reply</a><span class="item-control blog-admin blog-admin pid-1041579015"><a target="_self" href="https://www.blogger.com/delete-comment.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=5955030059738837980">Delete</a></span></span></div><div class="comment-replies"><div id="c5955030059738837980-rt" class="comment-thread inline-thread hidden"><span class="thread-toggle thread-expanded"><span class="thread-arrow"></span><span class="thread-count"><a target="_self">Replies</a></span></span><ol id="c5955030059738837980-ra" class="thread-chrome thread-expanded"><div></div><div id="c5955030059738837980-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="5955030059738837980">Reply</a></div></ol></div></div><div class="comment-replybox-single" id="c5955030059738837980-ce"></div></li><li class="comment" id="c1490799410438556173"><div class="avatar-image-container"><img src="//resources.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif" alt=""/></div><div class="comment-block"><div class="comment-header"><cite class="user">Anonymous</cite><span class="icon user blog-author"></span><span class="datetime secondary-text"><a rel="nofollow" href="https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/2018/09/my-writing-reflestion.html?showComment=1537306892716#c1490799410438556173">19 September 2018 at 09:41</a></span></div><p class="comment-content">Kia ora Acasia <br>i really like your writing one i like the one that says thi is my progress i like how your writing was and then now they both look pretty cool i like the one your writing looks now that one is pretty cool well done next time you could maybe put a other thing on your blog one <br>well i have to go now bye!<br></p><span class="comment-actions secondary-text"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="1490799410438556173">Reply</a><span class="item-control blog-admin blog-admin pid-1041579015"><a target="_self" href="https://www.blogger.com/delete-comment.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=1490799410438556173">Delete</a></span></span></div><div class="comment-replies"><div id="c1490799410438556173-rt" class="comment-thread inline-thread hidden"><span class="thread-toggle thread-expanded"><span class="thread-arrow"></span><span class="thread-count"><a target="_self">Replies</a></span></span><ol id="c1490799410438556173-ra" class="thread-chrome thread-expanded"><div></div><div id="c1490799410438556173-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="1490799410438556173">Reply</a></div></ol></div></div><div class="comment-replybox-single" id="c1490799410438556173-ce"></div></li><li class="comment" id="c6755654791254968768"><div class="avatar-image-container"><img src="//resources.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif" alt=""/></div><div class="comment-block"><div class="comment-header"><cite class="user">Anonymous</cite><span class="icon user blog-author"></span><span class="datetime secondary-text"><a rel="nofollow" href="https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/2018/09/my-writing-reflestion.html?showComment=1537306996321#c6755654791254968768">19 September 2018 at 09:43</a></span></div><p class="comment-content">kia ora acasia.<br>I love the way you have used onomatopoeia and you could use it in a book or a story, this is a great way to do a reflection, but maybe next time you could use commars and more full stops because you haven't used them alot so yeah, this is me bye </p><span class="comment-actions secondary-text"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="6755654791254968768">Reply</a><span class="item-control blog-admin blog-admin pid-1041579015"><a target="_self" href="https://www.blogger.com/delete-comment.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=6755654791254968768">Delete</a></span></span></div><div class="comment-replies"><div id="c6755654791254968768-rt" class="comment-thread inline-thread hidden"><span class="thread-toggle thread-expanded"><span class="thread-arrow"></span><span class="thread-count"><a target="_self">Replies</a></span></span><ol id="c6755654791254968768-ra" class="thread-chrome thread-expanded"><div></div><div id="c6755654791254968768-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="6755654791254968768">Reply</a></div></ol></div></div><div class="comment-replybox-single" id="c6755654791254968768-ce"></div></li><li class="comment" id="c2781175998783348031"><div class="avatar-image-container"><img src="//resources.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif" alt=""/></div><div class="comment-block"><div class="comment-header"><cite class="user">Anonymous</cite><span class="icon user blog-author"></span><span class="datetime secondary-text"><a rel="nofollow" href="https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/2018/09/my-writing-reflestion.html?showComment=1537307696960#c2781175998783348031">19 September 2018 at 09:54</a></span></div><p class="comment-content">hi acasia its dylan from whakamanawa these goals that you put on your slide are really good have you used onamatipaer because you dont have much commars or full stops anyway blog you later</p><span class="comment-actions secondary-text"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="2781175998783348031">Reply</a><span class="item-control blog-admin blog-admin pid-1041579015"><a target="_self" href="https://www.blogger.com/delete-comment.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=2781175998783348031">Delete</a></span></span></div><div class="comment-replies"><div id="c2781175998783348031-rt" class="comment-thread inline-thread hidden"><span class="thread-toggle thread-expanded"><span class="thread-arrow"></span><span class="thread-count"><a target="_self">Replies</a></span></span><ol id="c2781175998783348031-ra" class="thread-chrome thread-expanded"><div></div><div id="c2781175998783348031-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="2781175998783348031">Reply</a></div></ol></div></div><div class="comment-replybox-single" id="c2781175998783348031-ce"></div></li><li class="comment" id="c1483804257148564281"><div class="avatar-image-container"><img src="//resources.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif" alt=""/></div><div class="comment-block"><div class="comment-header"><cite class="user">Anonymous</cite><span class="icon user blog-author"></span><span class="datetime secondary-text"><a rel="nofollow" href="https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/2018/09/my-writing-reflestion.html?showComment=1537308321021#c1483804257148564281">19 September 2018 at 10:05</a></span></div><p class="comment-content">Kia ora Acacia Its Latoiya I Really Like your writing Good Job On using Capital letters I Really Enjoyed Your progress </p><span class="comment-actions secondary-text"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="1483804257148564281">Reply</a><span class="item-control blog-admin blog-admin pid-1041579015"><a target="_self" href="https://www.blogger.com/delete-comment.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=1483804257148564281">Delete</a></span></span></div><div class="comment-replies"><div id="c1483804257148564281-rt" class="comment-thread inline-thread hidden"><span class="thread-toggle thread-expanded"><span class="thread-arrow"></span><span class="thread-count"><a target="_self">Replies</a></span></span><ol id="c1483804257148564281-ra" class="thread-chrome thread-expanded"><div></div><div id="c1483804257148564281-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="1483804257148564281">Reply</a></div></ol></div></div><div class="comment-replybox-single" id="c1483804257148564281-ce"></div></li><li class="comment" id="c8086211091114990254"><div class="avatar-image-container"><img src="//resources.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif" alt=""/></div><div class="comment-block"><div class="comment-header"><cite class="user">Anonymous</cite><span class="icon user blog-author"></span><span class="datetime secondary-text"><a rel="nofollow" href="https://gpsacasiamc.blogspot.com/2018/09/my-writing-reflestion.html?showComment=1542837292309#c8086211091114990254">22 November 2018 at 10:54</a></span></div><p class="comment-content">Kia Ora, my name is Ivan and i'm from Room 18 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about writing</p><span class="comment-actions secondary-text"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="8086211091114990254">Reply</a><span class="item-control blog-admin blog-admin pid-1041579015"><a target="_self" href="https://www.blogger.com/delete-comment.g?blogID=6537476355062344486&postID=8086211091114990254">Delete</a></span></span></div><div class="comment-replies"><div id="c8086211091114990254-rt" class="comment-thread inline-thread hidden"><span class="thread-toggle thread-expanded"><span class="thread-arrow"></span><span class="thread-count"><a target="_self">Replies</a></span></span><ol id="c8086211091114990254-ra" class="thread-chrome thread-expanded"><div></div><div id="c8086211091114990254-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self" data-comment-id="8086211091114990254">Reply</a></div></ol></div></div><div class="comment-replybox-single" id="c8086211091114990254-ce"></div></li></ol><div id="top-continue" class="continue"><a class="comment-reply" target="_self">Add comment</a></div><div class="comment-replybox-thread" id="top-ce"></div><div class="loadmore hidden" data-post-id="4605807178353983708"><a target="_self">Load more...</a></div></div> </div> </div> <p class='comment-footer'> <div class='comment-form'> <a name='comment-form'></a> <p>Please structure your comments as follows:<br />Positive - Something done well<br />Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say<br />Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about</p> <p>Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.</p> <a href='https://www.blogger.com/comment/frame/6537476355062344486?po=4605807178353983708&hl=en-GB' id='comment-editor-src'></a> <iframe allowtransparency='true' class='blogger-iframe-colorize blogger-comment-from-post' frameborder='0' height='410' id='comment-editor' name='comment-editor' src='' width='100%'>
Newer Post
Older Post
Home
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)