My Writing
Today my class and I were told to post our piece of writing that we did about in the past two weeks. The topic of the writing was about fireworks but it was not a true story but its what my school calls a describe in time which is basically about where we get given a picture and we just describe it like its happening to us at the time but anyways we did a piece of writing around fireworks. Here is what I have done.
My next step is to create a bigger and better story next time. I hope you enjoyed reading my writing and did you think I could improve on it or do you think it's interesting enough?
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